Aet Lindling

Interesting. I was scoffing at the need to include a glossary at first, but I suppose the point is that you think it’s violent at first and once deciphered realize ...

Dang, what a powerful poem. I love the ending. This really spoke to me, even though I’ve never really experienced any of the life events depicted. And isn’t that a ...

1) I have no idea, but the villagers could be desire and the plague sexual assault. The second stanza makes this seem more likely with the ‘pink petal’ that a ...

Amorist! What a fun word. And what a fun poem. I love the journey you take us on, even if it’s somewhat predictable it’s well-worn territory for a reason. There’s ...

Just a very minor nitpick here, perhaps I’ll return later to do a proper review. Sorry. Typically, style guides generally recommend no spaces around an em-dash unless they’re in a ...

OH WOW this is so impressive compared to the chapter before it, it totally caught me off guard! Reading the content warning my eyes widened and I went back and ...

I actually love this quite a bit. I relate to nearly every line and it’s got solid rhymes mostly and a good flow. However, the one main critique I would ...

Oh cool, lesbian stuff. Firstly, there should definitely not be a comma after ‘slight’ where Tikaya said there should be. No shade meant, but that is incorrect. Anyway, the way ...

I like the singing accompaniment, it makes it much easier to see how the lyrics are meant to sound and effectively critique. Keep it up for your pieces even if ...

Well, there isn't too much to critique here. I'm assuming this is meant as a joking one-off, and it fulfills its purpose decently well for that, as far as subject ...

Gotta say, while this isn't terrible, it's certainly not as good as people are making it out to be. There are some fairly major flaws that reveal themselves on closer ...

Now, I have to admit 2014 was by far one of the worst years I've had, so I may not be the best person for sympathy here. :P But despite ...

You're off to a good start! The pacing emotionally is decent, and you've picked something worth talking about. However, I must say, taken on its own this poem doesn't make ...

You suggest that you are perfecting ASCII boobies in this poem, however you never make a significant development I feel would have added greatly to the work. ( o Y ...

Hi there, Sionarama! There's not much to really critique here, of course, since it's a rather short poem, but I'll do what I can. It's interesting, and while I get ...